"By the Book" progress
I have a few problems with my sketch outline. This is a step before a treatment, more a series of notes that outline the story rather than what is typically called an outline, usually a beat by beat measure of the scenes.
My original ending leaves the main character unsympathetic. Maybe that's OK. More seriously, I'm having trouble getting there. Third-act difficulties are new to me; typically I suffer the more common second-act blues. I just have to slog through it for now. I have plenty of time for changes before the treatment is due in March.
I've also noticed that the story seems to switch focus. I start with the male lead and gradually pay more and more attention to the female lead. I don't think that's a problem if I can craft the third act to return focus to the male. The emphasis on the female lead is a subplot, then. Again, however, it puts pressure on my third act.
Today's a day of thinking and perhaps writing if the solution comes to me.
My original ending leaves the main character unsympathetic. Maybe that's OK. More seriously, I'm having trouble getting there. Third-act difficulties are new to me; typically I suffer the more common second-act blues. I just have to slog through it for now. I have plenty of time for changes before the treatment is due in March.
I've also noticed that the story seems to switch focus. I start with the male lead and gradually pay more and more attention to the female lead. I don't think that's a problem if I can craft the third act to return focus to the male. The emphasis on the female lead is a subplot, then. Again, however, it puts pressure on my third act.
Today's a day of thinking and perhaps writing if the solution comes to me.
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